Time line. Blog # 13

Today in class we work in grups to start are essay. Mrs. Crawford told us a way to do start and do the essay by using a time line. The essay we are doing is about vlogs from You Tube in which we had to discrive the whle vlog with a grade amount of detail. By using th time line we wear going to be able to dicrive the essay minute by minut. In the grups we go in class we help each other to do the time line. My partner and I did the time line one by one first we work on hers and then on mine. the way we did that without watching the video, is that she told me all about the blog with the most details that she could. We made the time line and make it from the bigining to the end. Lets say from minute one, to minute five. We work with my and her ideas to make the essay as detail as posible by talking about the background what the person was woring, how he look the way he talk where his from, and all the facts or opinions you can get. I was telling her what I think about the vlog she had chose and the details i though she could add to reach the leght.