Second Essay

I wrote a blog in which the seating was that I personally was mad because I had a low grade in my English class. The blog was very bad because it had almost no details and was unsophisticated. I know that I did not work hard on doing the essay but now that i look at it and have done another essay with the same them and but using all my abilities to write the difference is a lot. The second essay I did has more details better format and better gramme. I also had to go to the writ ting center to edit and revise the essay. So from the first essay to the next there was a lot of change, i guess because i toke the second one more seriously because it was not just a blog it was an assignment in which we had longer time to do so. That is way I think my writing improve but it is a grate change and now i know what to do, to go into the writing center and take my work a lit to more seriously. Just saying that my first essay the blog is the same leght but it was to a friend not to a teacher so it was a lot different vocabulary and acting like if I was mad not in the second essay. The second was to a teacher and for a change of grade so I could not talk in any slang and my vocabulary had to be close to perfect.

The W.C.

My vi set to the writing work shop was very helpful. I made an essay for English class which i had to take to the writing center and talk to a tutor so she/him can go over and edit and revise the essay I had made. Wend I got to the writing center I was expecting some guy to just read my essay and tell me what I had to do so my essay will be done at the best of my ability's. What really happened when i walk in there was all different, it was nothing like I expected. The person that was my tutor really help my by reading my essay Senates by Senates and adding new and better words that make it sound a lot better. He help my a lot because my essay was to complicated and he help to simplify it. He show me lots of other way to have a good essay with just enough details so it will sound awesome. So I was very please with my visit to the writing center, now I know that whenever I need help I can go there and aspect the best help possible.

Internet Relationships

Internet relationships sound good for some people but not for others. Some reasons for people to like Internet meeting, if you are a shy person it works for you because you don't see the person in the other side of the computer so you have more time to response to any comments made. Also if you do not have any type of dating expires there is a program that simulates a date. If your in a restaurant you will have a water and you will have to order and start a conversations with the person you try to meet. One other thing that helps you is that eHarmony works with your information and personality to find a date for you, that is very alike. In the other hand you never know if the person on the other end. In the U.S. there have been a lot of situations wear a person is trick to go in a date with another individual that ends up being a reap est (criminal). Also you never know if the person is telling the truth about them self. So that is something i learn about Internet relationships some work but not all.
From my point of view i like more dates in person I have never try the Internet dating up, and i don't want to it just don't get my attention. For all the people that try to find a person to love online, GOOD LUCK!!!!.

The essay

Today in class we wear talking about how to make a good email to a teacher. The email being about a grade that u have for her class in which you work hard and put lots of effort using the bast of your ability's and steal get a low grade.
In class we talk about the structure like the interdiction the theses, body and conclusion. I learn that in the opening sentence is not good to state what you want or need, but is much better to let them now with clues and things like that. Also the body doesn't need to be rally long just make your point clear and in this situation state the facts you now and things you did. Like if you when to any study place or get help by any person like a true. In which you will be able to state the dates, and verify any tayp of study activities that help you make your paper good. One other thing i learn is that is not a good idea to use the word "you" or (him, things,) you have to be more specific and use lots of details.
The conclusion in which you can thank for the time they have spend on reading the email and asking for a time and place you can meet with the professor to talk about the grade you got for the essay and how to fix it and make it better.

Summarize

Today I read an article that talk about the use of IPhone in college and university's. IPhone is being use by some students in a way to improve their study, by using the IPhone to listen to lectures when the student is walking or doing any similar thing. Also students can view videos wherever they are. The IPhone is also going to give easy access to any article or book without living class. In the other hand for some students the use of IPhone is in a personal way because they just use the IPhone to get away from a class and to research, Tex, and email other people about personal things. I guess that all depends on the student because if they want to learn they will if they don't that is going to be a perfect way to get away from the schools environment.
The other article I was interest on is "how to bring our schools out of the 20th century" because it talks about a program that the U.S. president and a person call Al Gorge want to makes a program in which all the school and people with Lowe income are able have a computer. Also the program is investing money for more teachers and more schools. If the program works and is and if it is able to donate all the money for school purposes the communities are going to have the same change to succeed in life.

Writting about the Articles

all of the articles are really interesting but the two that got most of my attention are the "Reading wraiting, IPhoneing". The reason that I think this articel is interesting I because is talking about a university that is giving a IPhone of Ipod touch for all the freshman's. personally I will say that is just a way to get people to attend that university. Yes I thing it will help but also hurt the study environment of the students. The reason that i thing is going to help a student is because the IPhone has a lot of applications and Internet, That will help the student to get easy access to anything online. I also thing is going to hurt the student because some of them are not responsible inove to be in school with a phone so they are going to start texing and going online for other purposes in which they are going to decrease the academic performers.
The second article I want to talk about is "TXTNG: THE GR8 DB8" because texting is a big part of the day i will like to say that all the people that own a cellular device text a lot. A personal experiences i prefer texing over talking in the phone that is why I like the article. Some people say that texting just makes your gramme skills decrease, but that matters on the person like I have problems spelling and texing with "T9" helps you spell the words but it doesn't help you write with full sentences. The article also mention that if you text to much you will develop a finger disses. On that i just thing is nonsens because is do hart to develop a disses in your fingers just for texting. those two articles are the one's I was interesting in.

Today's experiencess

Today in my English class I learned that for college the computers is very important. To be successful in college you need to do all your work and make sure you don't fall behind. In order to do that you need a computer to do your homework and stay in touch with the professors. Today in class the professor help us by teaching how to use that computer for college needs. She demonstrate some ways to look the email, do the homework and some other things. Now i have a a college email, in which I get up dated with all the programs and new things going on. The other thing I learn was to blog. We made a blog to do some writing work so the teacher will be able to see are work whenever she wants and we will save a tree without using paper. I relays that that all the work necessary is done on the computer so their is never a excuse for me to not do the homework because if theirs a computer their is a way. All the homework is post on the PALS account so you can always now whats due ahead of time, and do the work so you can post it on your blog. The college email that we made is good because is an easy way so your teacher can reach you faster and essayer. So today we learned how to use that computer in a productive way.

The low Grade

Hey, Anna i can't believe what i found out today, all that hard work that i do for nothing imagine this i have such a a bad grade in my English class can you believe that. I think that the teacher is really demanding or may by she just doesn't like me, i don't know but its getting on my last nerves. I'm trying to find out a way to bring my grade up but with this lady it seems impossible, am at a point that i want to grab her by the hair and shake her till her heir felts out just kidding. No what i am going to do if by the end of the week i don't get the grade am expecting am going to take my hands push them into her eye sockets and make her count the lit to starts you see. I think that will make her change my grade or explain the course better or just get scare of me and change my grade.
The way she teaches the class is like a six year old is teaching she never makes a point, and always changes conversations without letting us now any of the main ideas. I think she doesn't even know what shes talking about half of the time, because she stops and looks at the book for answers and takes time to get back in track after every transition. Also most of the time she just tell use to read a chapter of the book so the next day as a class would talk about it so she wont have nothing to do or explain. After all that reading and talking about one idea in the book the homework she assigns is nothing like the chapter we read, but what can i do just try to make chicken sup out of chicken poop, and that is just not working.
I really hope that my grade changes because i don't want to get physical with the teacher, I know she is a nice person but she really acts like a jerk and trays her hardest to make the class so complicated. tomorrow am going to talk to her and see whats the problem, if am missing to much work, or if she is not doing her job and grading my assignments and projects. If she is not doing her job, am going to tape her to a chair with my work in front of he in a room full of snakes that if she lets her main wonder and her eyes out of focus for just a second the snakes will bated till she learned her lesson and does her job on time. That will be all crazy and mean i will never do something like that.
I hope that the project that is due tomorrow will get my grade up, because i put a lot of effort and work into that. If that dost do it the test that we take tomorrow will do because is a major grade and a really big part of my grade. All that for a low grade now I really think am crazy, but i know that my grade depends on my work and if is low i need tutoring and like people say to run the extra mile. The best thing i can do is get with my teacher and see if she will help me out and give my a chans to do extra work, or work that am missing.