Thursday, September 24, 2009

The W.C.

My vi set to the writing work shop was very helpful. I made an essay for English class which i had to take to the writing center and talk to a tutor so she/him can go over and edit and revise the essay I had made. Wend I got to the writing center I was expecting some guy to just read my essay and tell me what I had to do so my essay will be done at the best of my ability's. What really happened when i walk in there was all different, it was nothing like I expected. The person that was my tutor really help my by reading my essay Senates by Senates and adding new and better words that make it sound a lot better. He help my a lot because my essay was to complicated and he help to simplify it. He show me lots of other way to have a good essay with just enough details so it will sound awesome. So I was very please with my visit to the writing center, now I know that whenever I need help I can go there and aspect the best help possible.

1 comment:

  1. Your blog looks really short. You need to make sure you capialize your I's in your blog. I thought the writing center was very helpful to they really helped me with my essay. You saw the notebook paper that man wrote all over. I am glad that Mrs. Crawford makes us go to the writing center because it really does help my essays. Now on the other hand I hate reading my essays out loud to the person that is helping us with our paper. I also do not like all the activities we had to do in clss to help us with our paper. I do not think those class room activities help any ways. My only advice is to watch the length and capitization.

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