Monday, September 28, 2009
Second Essay
I wrote a blog in which the seating was that I personally was mad because I had a low grade in my English class. The blog was very bad because it had almost no details and was unsophisticated. I know that I did not work hard on doing the essay but now that i look at it and have done another essay with the same them and but using all my abilities to write the difference is a lot. The second essay I did has more details better format and better gramme. I also had to go to the writ ting center to edit and revise the essay. So from the first essay to the next there was a lot of change, i guess because i toke the second one more seriously because it was not just a blog it was an assignment in which we had longer time to do so. That is way I think my writing improve but it is a grate change and now i know what to do, to go into the writing center and take my work a lit to more seriously. Just saying that my first essay the blog is the same leght but it was to a friend not to a teacher so it was a lot different vocabulary and acting like if I was mad not in the second essay. The second was to a teacher and for a change of grade so I could not talk in any slang and my vocabulary had to be close to perfect.
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This blog is good. I like it because you don't hold back and you really thought about your expierence. I think you are right on track with this assignment. I would recommend using your spell check on your blogger, but that about it. looks like you got this blogging thing down. Keep up the good work. There are big difference in the essay and you mention everyone. I think we are all learning from this. Even I feel like I have come a long way and we have only been in school about six weeks. I feel I write a lot better to. This is by far my favorite class because I feel we are open with each other and real in this class. MEOW!!
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